Those three polices were still chatting happily. How can they still chatting like nothing happen? Didn’t they feel strange? No! It’s impossible! Is the old man still alive? Yes,I had killed him already. But maybe he’s alive. It’s his heartbeat! I had to killed him again. It would be the ending for his life show. And those of polices...I can’t let them out. They knew this terrible treat, they had heard the heartbeat. I will let them chatting with the old men for ever and ever. How kind I am! I added some snack for each of them. It’s the special snack that can kill the mouse. Soon, they won’t breath any more. I opened the wood floor again and killed the old man again. I cut his heart! And gouge his vulture Eye! Suddenly it become quietly. Very very quiet...then I heard the drops sound, it’s from...my chest. My heart were gone! But I heard the strange sound again. The old man’s vulture eye were in his chest. Then he smiled, also three of police! Didn’t they already die! I scream and jump out of window, wether it’s not in the first floor...
Peggy:
ReplyDeleteI can't imagine you also can write the horrible story like this, you create the whole new Tell Tale Heart ending with your imagination, it is a good idea.
Isaac Yu
Peggy:
ReplyDeleteThis is really an interesting ending of you! You decided to kill all of them first. However, you did not success, then you were too afraid of the situation and jump out of the window, this is a really wonderful ending and I like it a lot!
-Daniel Tsao
Peggy:
ReplyDeleteIt's a cool ending, he just jumped out of the window and ended his life, before this he just killed them, it's very creepy and insane.
-Vivi Weng
Peggy:
ReplyDeleteI never though you are this king of scary person, your ending shows up your personality, it is scary and wild, and your words also came put some powerful feeling, nice job.
Peter Lai
Peggy:
ReplyDeletethis is one of the possible ending. I never thought there is such kinds of endings. He jump out the window and kill himself. it is a interesting ending.
-Peter Lee
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