Kestrel was very tried when she arrived to the mountain. Her friend didn’t do anything, he just wait for her until she felt better. Kestrel started to explanted why she came here late very quickly. Because hr friend hadn’t said any words to her, Kestrel though he was angry at her. But he just touched her head and told her don’t worry. He said today is an important day. He was very happy that she had came here today. And, he would told her every things.
Kestrel was surprised and scared, she wanted to be more understated her friend, but she felt like if she knew it, he would dissipated. The sun was getting down, Kestrel could felt it’s not as warm as before, today was getting to the end. He touch her head again, she could felt the warm temperature from his hand. He asked her to held out her hand, he put something on Kestrel’s hand. And the soft wind went through, her tears came out. She felt her friend had leaved, his rough hands just like the frist time she came to this mountain. Kestrel gently touched a leaf in her hand, it was the last and the first gift from her dear friend. Although there were still the tears on her face, but she smiled. She made a promise again, that she would never forgot him in the future.
Peggy:
ReplyDeleteThe story that you made was very touching,I feel very sad that her friend has gone,but he must lived in her heart forever,it's a great story.
-Vivi Weng
Peggy:
ReplyDeleteIn the last paragraph, it's very sad that she lost her friend, but in your writing, that just like tell us he will never disappear in her heart, and it make the reader feel warm, nice job!
Peter Lai
Peggy:
ReplyDeleteI love this ending way, this resolution makes me feel pleased, in fact, this story can actually took in a video by yourself, it is a really good story and it is touching, too!
-Daniel Tsao
Peggy:
ReplyDeleteThis is a really warm and fragrant story. I think you did a good job on describe the whole story, you always used the way like someone it's talking the story with a smooth voice. I love your story!
Amber Lin
Peggy:
ReplyDeleteYou did a good job. I read your hole story at the beginning to the end and the story. I really like it, specially the ending part.