ESLII Journal 2 Effort?

The  sweet smell full of the room. When I open the big oven, the heat hit on my face.  It’s a plate of the cookies, with the yummy smell. I always see the baking on the television and the book. It’s look very fun and yummy. You can put the food that your like to make the new kinds. It can be any size or any look that I want it to be. Just like I am doing my art work. Although the course of events have a little difficulty, but it is also my motivation. When the people eat the dessert that I made, it will made me feel accomplished if they like it. Because it’s mean the dessert that I made is success. Now I  had only made the basic chocolate yet, if I can I want to make the Wagashi  and the little cake.And Wagashi is the dessert that I mostly want to make. With the different culture and tradition. It has the refinement outward and the special tasty also the production of materials are different than any Western desserts. Because I am not that skillful to make the Wagashi yet, so I will started on the first level an work hard to make out my own Wagashi.

ESLII Topic 1 Poetry

Poems can be short and bon’t have to be a complete sentence. So it’s more simple than the other works. It just like the short paragraph, some of the poems can make like the song also the story. You can write any kinds and  anything in the poems. But the special of the poems is the sounds, it pay attention on the syllable and the rhyme. In the common writing, we won’t use the syllable and rhyme, but poems does. It make the poem more vivid, when you read it it can make you feel like you’re sing a song. Poem isn’t common like the essay, but it also full in our life. It can been seem on the advertising, the beverage bottle, in the MRT also some of people usually use it in their ordinary life. Some of advertising can make people get closer to their new products, and make the advertising have the better temperament. And the poem on the beverage bottle is alway made by the feeling of the mood that can be match with the drinks. Some of the people who are sensitive, they can feel the thing strongly. They express their feeling, like what their found in the nature, the people or themselves. When they try to explain, the beautiful things will sound like the elegant poem. But because of the poem is more shorter than the essay, some of the things won’t describe carefully, so sometimes the reader can got the whole things that the writer what to said. Why people still writing the poem, I think it’s because of although we can’t got it sometimes, but the poem can bring the different feeling and the describe the special world that they met.