ESLII Journal 21: Falling Action

Kestrel walked around her room and tried to find the other way to go out. But her room is in the second floor. It only have one door in her room. When Kestrel became confused, she heard the sound on the top of the house. It heard likes there is some one on the roof. She guess it the worker who was fixing the roof. And the smile retured on her ashen face. She opened her window, just liked what she though. There is a ladder close to her window, but she couldn’t touched it. She first made sure the worker was already on the roof. And she used the stick to pull the ladder close to her window. Kestrel went out the window and climbed down the ladder carefully. Because it was the first time she used the ladder, her mother always limited all the things she though was dangerous for her. Just like the ladder. When Kestrel stepped on the ground, she started to run. It was already late for the time that she promised to her friend. She ran over the forest as fast as she could, when she arrived to the top of mountain. Her friend was sitting under the tree, she could’d saw it, but she still knew it.

ESLII Journal 20: My Climax

 Kestrel woke up in the early morning, she prepared all the things she would need when she went to meet her friend. But when she was ready, she discovered that her room door was locked! She couldn’t open insides, it locked at outside. And she graphed a notes on the floor. It was wrote by her mom, it said she needed to go to other city but she don’t want Kestrel went out again, so she limited her in her room until she went back. It made Kestrel become very nervose. It was the last day before she went back to the city. So today is the last day she could went to the mountain. She wants to realize her promise and enjoyed the last time to play with first friend. But the door was locked, and her mother had already warned her. She had nerver disobey her mother’s notion, she knew it’s all because  mother was worried about her. Her mother wants to protect her. But she wants to treasure the last time to be with her first friends. Kestrel didn’t knew what to do. But in the boton of her mind, the intense for worried she would nerver met her friend had become bigger and bigger.

ESLII Journal 19: My Character

My character is the girl who called Kestrel. She is a talk less gril, and she like the quiet place. She wants to make some friends, but she is very shy and her voice is very soft and whisper. It cause her become lonely in the school. And the other things that cause her not easy to be with others is, she can’t see. So her eyes had never opened, it always were closed. It make her mother takes more attention on her. But she is usually a cute girl. She had the long brown hair, and the white skin. Although she wants to make friends, but the eyes problem let her felt unconfident, also because her mother’s overprotection. Her mother always worry about her, worry her daughter would got hurt or bully because her difference. So she become very careful when she met her first friend. She was afraid to be with others, but she also wanted to play with others. On this summer vocation, she had got the chance, and found her courage. But is thad against to her mother’s premonition. She is  a principles girl, she is proud for comply with the promise she had made. And the two different promise between two important people in her life, it made her became comfused on the decision.

ESLII Journal 18: My Rising Action

Girls mother found out, after the girl had went back late from the mountain. She started to go to the mountain everyday. Especially on the day she went back with the big smile and leaf, after that day she went back home until the sunset. 

The gils is surprised, after she discovered the biggest tree on the top of mountain. She went there oftenly when she want to find the place that was peaceful. But one day, she heard the person’s sound. It’s very gentle and tender. Like the wing blowing through your face. She didn’t know who was he, but he was talking to her. The other thing that the girl were surprised, she didn’t felt scary when this person straightly appeared and talking to her. She didn’t remember why, but they become the friend that no ones know. Because the girl didn’t tell anyones, and her new friend, he said he live on the top of mountain. She is very curious about who he is and what he look like. One times she asked him about his name and touch his face to knew his look.  But he just said on the day summer end, he will told her and let she knew. She promised to him, she will went to the mountain everyday and until the day she needed to went back to city. She was very careful, careful to be with her  new friend, and her first friend

ESLII Journal 17: My Conflict

My conflict is men v.s men and men v.s themselves, it’s the  internal conflict, and the external conflict. The internal conflict is men v.s herself,she needed to make the choice between the promise and mother’s obey. The external conflict is men v.s men, her mother limit her freedom and limit her in the house.

The character in the story met the mysterious person on the sparsely populated mountain. It cause her mother worry about her, and than limit her in the house. But the character had already made the promise with the mysterious person she met on the mountain. It cause her be confuse and struggle in her mother’s remind and the promise she had made. She don’t want to let her mother worry and despair, but she also doesn’t want to break her promise. If she stay in the house to obey her mother’s caution, she most break a promise, it’s not the things she want to do. But if she  protect her promise and went out to the mountain, her mother will be very very sad, she can’t make her mother feel distressed.She want to solve these two problems, she want to protect her promise and keep her mother’s smile.But she still need to make the select as quick as she can, because she doesn’t have much time. 

ESLII Journal 16: My Exposition

Many year ago, the happily summer vocation in July. There is a village full with the birds and insects chirping. A little girl went with her parents to have the vacation in the country. This village is more peaceful than the city she lived. She walked in the huge forest on the hill, the big and tall trees surround her, did’t have any sound expect the birds, insects or the soft wing with the grass smell.  Even through she can’t see any of them, but she can just know their are really here.She walked on the top of mountain, there is the tallest and bigest tree on the middle. She touch on it’s hard rough bark, and stand by the this tree. It made she looked more smaller when she stand by it. She sited by this tree until  the sky become orange, the moon appeared, she walked down the hill. Walked on the road in the farmland, smoothly pluck a fruit, it tasted like the plum. Although she did’t even know what is it. A little house far away with the nice and warm light is the place she temporary stay. Her mother stand by the door, and with the big smile when she saw her back. 

ESLII Journal 15: Hip Pop language

Tear the workbook, throw the textbook

It’s not that important

Hind in the kitchen, just not gonna been teaching

Ran away from school, break out all the rules

Step on people’s leg, hit on people's face

Teacher can’t be tell, classmate can’t be help

It’s not that serious

Walk down the normal street

buy all the things, pay without think

it all of my life, not like the normal guy

I walk with people’s sight

they all look at me, because I am not same as them

start the scream, sing on the street

it’s my style, it’s my tone

not like the normal

I am trying to describe about the person who is egomaniac and full with confident. Also the people who don’t care about other’s vision, just do the thing they want. Represent themselves without artifice. Show up their style bravely, persevere in their own style and not change it easily. Although some of things might not be very good to do but it also show up this person’s opinion. Have the personal idea, behave very different than others beside them. Just like the teenagers’ create their own style of behavior and thinking, or the teenagers’ who were in rebellious phase.