What part of the scary story would made you absolutely horrified？ If I stay alone in the big bleaker building,and the building is old and quiet, I must tremble with fear. In this time, all the things you would imagine to the scary organism or it even isn’t the organism. The blurred sound that you heard, you won’t knew who made it. I scary of the big building with no body, like the place used to be the school, hospital or military base. This kinds of place just like the ruins, it used to have many people stay in so it also can be very big and bleaker, then you would felt you were the only one who were still here. Because this place is so different than your acknowledge.
When I heard or saw somethings in the ruins, I can’t know that isn’t it came from my imagine. Even though I wanted to find out where is it came from, my eyes was already find out that there is no people here. And it would made me want to get out from this place but I can even move my foot. In the bleaker place, the sound of breathing could be heard very clearly, and my first wish would be get out off this place!
Peggy:
ReplyDeleteYour example is really scary! I can't stay alone in an old building either! Especially at night, I cannot even imagine about it!
-Daniel Tsao
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ReplyDeletePeggy:
ReplyDeleteWow! That is already scare enough for me, if the character is me, I promise you I am going to run faster than anything else, because I don't like to be alone too.
Isaac Yu
Peggy:
ReplyDeleteWhen I was reading your journal I also listen the music that was a little bet scare so I really feel the scare from your example, I also doesn't like to stay in the ruins, nice job!!
Peter Lai
Peggy:
ReplyDeleteYour story really freaking me out, don't even say about old buildings,even a room, I can't stay there alone, nice one, because I really can imagine how scary it is.
-Vivi Weng
Peggy:
ReplyDeleteYou really made me feel scary when I was reading your journal. You really know how to describe the picture in your mind.
Amber Lin
Peggy:
ReplyDeleteYour Event is very scary. if I was walking in the road lonely, I will fell very scary. It is impossible for me the walk on the road at night.
-Peter Lee
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