Wednesday, April 24, 2013

ESLII Journal 19: My Character


My character is the girl who called Kestrel. She is a talk less gril, and she like the quiet place. She wants to make some friends, but she is very shy and her voice is very soft and whisper. It cause her become lonely in the school. And the other things that cause her not easy to be with others is, she can’t see. So her eyes had never opened, it always were closed. It make her mother takes more attention on her. But she is usually a cute girl. She had the long brown hair, and the white skin. Although she wants to make friends, but the eyes problem let her felt unconfident, also because her mother’s overprotection. Her mother always worry about her, worry her daughter would got hurt or bully because her difference. So she become very careful when she met her first friend. She was afraid to be with others, but she also wanted to play with others. On this summer vocation, she had got the chance, and found her courage. But is thad against to her mother’s premonition. She is  a principles girl, she is proud for comply with the promise she had made. And the two different promise between two important people in her life, it made her became comfused on the decision.

3 comments:

  1. Peggy:

    It is a good introduction of your main character,hope the character in your story could be more clearly to make her own decision.

    -Vivi Weng

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  2. Peggy,
    When i finished your essay, a person appeared in my mind, that is you because your character is just like you.

    Peter Lai

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  3. Peggy:
    After finish the essay, I fell this girl is very poor because she can see. This is not a good things to happen on a little girl.
    peter lee

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