Girls mother found out, after the girl had went back late from the mountain. She started to go to the mountain everyday. Especially on the day she went back with the big smile and leaf, after that day she went back home until the sunset.
The gils is surprised, after she discovered the biggest tree on the top of mountain. She went there oftenly when she want to find the place that was peaceful. But one day, she heard the person’s sound. It’s very gentle and tender. Like the wing blowing through your face. She didn’t know who was he, but he was talking to her. The other thing that the girl were surprised, she didn’t felt scary when this person straightly appeared and talking to her. She didn’t remember why, but they become the friend that no ones know. Because the girl didn’t tell anyones, and her new friend, he said he live on the top of mountain. She is very curious about who he is and what he look like. One times she asked him about his name and touch his face to knew his look. But he just said on the day summer end, he will told her and let she knew. She promised to him, she will went to the mountain everyday and until the day she needed to went back to city. She was very careful, careful to be with her new friend, and her first friend
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ReplyDeletePeggy:
ReplyDeleteSounds interesting! Is the girl blind? So sad. The way you describe the story is really attractive, good job! I expect to see a beautiful ending.
Amber
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ReplyDeleteHi Peggy:
ReplyDeleteA mystery boy! I can't wait to see his face and know his name, it is a nice rising action in your story, I hope that they can be a good friend forever.
-Vivi Weng