Tuesday, April 16, 2013

ESLII Journal 17: My Conflict

My conflict is men v.s men and men v.s themselves, it’s the  internal conflict, and the external conflict. The internal conflict is men v.s herself,she needed to make the choice between the promise and mother’s obey. The external conflict is men v.s men, her mother limit her freedom and limit her in the house.
The character in the story met the mysterious person on the sparsely populated mountain. It cause her mother worry about her, and than limit her in the house. But the character had already made the promise with the mysterious person she met on the mountain. It cause her be confuse and struggle in her mother’s remind and the promise she had made. She don’t want to let her mother worry and despair, but she also doesn’t want to break her promise. If she stay in the house to obey her mother’s caution, she most break a promise, it’s not the things she want to do. But if she  protect her promise and went out to the mountain, her mother will be very very sad, she can’t make her mother feel distressed.She want to solve these two problems, she want to protect her promise and keep her mother’s smile.But she still need to make the select as quick as she can, because she doesn’t have much time. 

5 comments:

  1. That is a great conflict, you label out the type of the conflict to make the reader understand easily, but i think if you don't label it out, just let the reader figure it out, is will be fun, and reader also can understand the conflict in their own way, but this is a great effort.

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  2. I think most of your conflict will be the internal conflict, which is man vs. selves, including the gril was wondering the freedom, confusing why her mom does not want to let her go out and also, the strongly mind that makes the girl wants to go out so bad. Daniel Tsao

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  3. I like you conflict, and it also made me curious about who is that mysterious person? Why did the character make a promise with him/her? Attractive! I would like to know the rest of the story!

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  4. You describe your character very well, I can tell that the girl in the story must be a good kid, from the conflict of men vs herself, she wanted to make her mom happy too, it is a great journal, good job. Vivi Weng

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  5. i can easily see what the conflict is. the way you write this story is very good and interesting and i really like it. it is a good story.

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