Tear the workbook, throw the textbook
It’s not that important
Hind in the kitchen, just not gonna been teaching
Ran away from school, break out all the rules
Step on people’s leg, hit on people's face
Teacher can’t be tell, classmate can’t be help
It’s not that serious
Walk down the normal street
buy all the things, pay without think
it all of my life, not like the normal guy
I walk with people’s sight
they all look at me, because I am not same as them
start the scream, sing on the street
it’s my style, it’s my tone
not like the normal
I am trying to describe about the person who is egomaniac and full with confident. Also the people who don’t care about other’s vision, just do the thing they want. Represent themselves without artifice. Show up their style bravely, persevere in their own style and not change it easily. Although some of things might not be very good to do but it also show up this person’s opinion. Have the personal idea, behave very different than others beside them. Just like the teenagers’ create their own style of behavior and thinking, or the teenagers’ who were in rebellious phase.
i like your tone in this journal, and you really shows that how the people who full of confidence will be like, you did a great job on this one, i like it.
ReplyDeleteyou use a lot of rhyming. Each sentence does rhyme. You use a lot of time to do this hw right cause I can tell when I read your poem.
ReplyDeleteIt seems you really don't like the rules and school, you use a lot of rhyme in your hip hop language, which is a good thing, because the most important thing for it is the rhyme skill, the sentence also describe your mood clearly.
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