Tuesday, March 12, 2013

ESLII Journal 7 Three Pigs


After the event of the “Three Pigs” The wolf also had three little wolves. One day, three little need to live by themselves, so they live their family. The first thing they do is make their house, the oldest wolf is very lazy. It build his cave with the dry grass, it thought it’s enough to be the house. The second wolf want to make the better house than his brother, so it build it’s cave by the wood. And the youngest wolf also don’t want to make the cave same as other. So it build the house with the tile, it’s harder than dry grass and wood. But few days after, there are the big pig will the iron rake came to knock the oldest wolf’s door. But the wolf was sleeping, so the pig used it’s rake broken the cave. It made the wolf woke up and stranded to run, because the pig won’t be it’s friend. He run to his second brother’s cave and hide in, few minutes later, the big pig came to the wood cave. He knock the door again, but two little wolves were too afried to open, so the pid used the rakes hited the wood cave again. The cave broken, two wolves ran as fast as they can to their youngest brother’s cave and hide in. When the pig came in front of the tile cave. It straight hit the tile door. The tile isn’t strong enough to stop the iron. So the cave broke, three little wolves withdraw on the conner, the big pig shout very loudly said who had bullied his relative. Just when the pig want to use it’s rake to hit the wolves, the long corncob hit on the pig’s head. And a monkey appeared it angrily condemned the big pig about why it without permission from the team and mike. The fierce monkey drag the big pig away and didn’t gave the wolves and sight. But after this misfortune, three little wolves learn to made their house more strongly.

1 comment:

  1. this story's conflict is men vs men, which are the three little wolves and the big angry pig.
    Peggy I think you can be more careful when you write your story, because i find some words that have spelling mistake, so if you can change them, while your are doing your homework, i believe your story will be more clearly and be more fascinated that the others.

    Isaac Yu

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