Friday, March 22, 2013

ESLII Journal 12: List Pome


The blank stationery 
With the empty envelope
Move the pen 
Trace my mood 
Color pencils are dancing
More and more 
Quick and quick
Like the butterfly flying
Illustration are everywhere
Stickers of bear
Every kinds of souvenir
Every kinds of photos
Whit the paper type
Envelope were not hollow any more
All of things in this envelope
Is the things that I want you know
The glue seal up the hole
The stamp  is the ticket for you 
To open my memory
My best friend

4 comments:

  1. What a nice poem Peggy! you describe the mood of exciting that you can't wait to let your friend knows what are you going to tell her, this is really a nice poem, keep going!

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  2. wow your poem is like having human's soul,they can dance and moving quickly,thats amazing.
    and i like the way when you write your poem.

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  3. Sweet and great poem Peggy, you used many words to describe what happened while you're writing the latter for you friend, just like I was beside you during these.

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  4. your poem is really good and it rhythm a lot and you also use other poetic elements. even though this poem is not easy to understand but i can guess what the poem said

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